This one ended up on the virtual DNF stack.
There was just so much thrown at the reader within the first chapter that I was overwhelmed. Haven and her mom Paris are vampires. Two years ago, Haven's dad was killed and they have been on the run to include Haven having to cut and dye her hair. Paris found a new mate who happens to be horse shifters that originated on another planet. Then a third mate who is also from another planet is thrown in. I get the instantaneous connection when Haven and Landon and Stang. It is a common thread in shifter novels. What was annoying was how they constantly called Haven "Little Filley".
I am normally all for campy and an escapist read, but what put the nail in the coffin was the need for proofreading and basic editing.
I voluntarily reviewed an ARC provided by NetGalley. Thank you.
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